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Critique by shortfingerzzz Oct 29, 2010, 11:24:58 AM
Hello - First of all I'd like to say that overall I like this image, but there are a few things I'd like to point out.

You didn't choose the correct shape for the image. The highest point of the mountain should be centered, but in this case it's in the left side of the image normally this adds to the dynamics and impact this image provides, but tn this case it looks somehow cropped. I don't know if you did any editing on the image, but you could've made the trees and the ground stand out more. The reflection is great I like the relaxing feeling the image gives me, and I also like how you plased your signature. I can't say mush about originality, because there are over a million users in this site and most of them are photographers - so there must be thousands of images simular to this one. I also think that the quality of the image isn't at it's best, BUT - if this image was nade with a shape that fits the monitor - it would've made a great wallpaper. I think that you've already found your style and you follow all the basic rules of photography - it shows in all your photos. : D
Hope you accept this critique. And just so you know - I'd never criticize an image I don't like.
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dacrt Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lovelly shot and so amazing how can nature can show us the image of our eyes and duplicated the image of nature for a secound .the best . you are
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o0oLUXo0o Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2010
Thank you very much.. its a Beautiful Place.. I cant stop going there... and every time i do I find something i love even more..
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robert-kim-karen Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
It's a beautiful photo.
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I don't agree with the critique in as far as the composition. I think you chose good by having the peak off center.
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If there were one nit I would want to pick, it may be the moss in the foreground. Not sure if you could have changed to camera angle to compensate for that though.
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o0oLUXo0o Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2010
Yea the floating slime was hard to get around.. its was all over.. i managed to find a place to stand and get less wet and have the peak of the mountain reflection mach up with the slime in the water. and this is what I got :)
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robert-kim-karen Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
All told. not bas.
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You wearing boots for this?
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Lufteluke Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2010  Student General Artist
That's an amazing reflection! I like how the water doesn't have a single ripple in it, hence creating the near perfect reflection. It might've looked better if you go closer to the water though, I think it'd make it more symmetric, but I might be wrong.


Either way it's an amazing photograph
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o0oLUXo0o Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2010
Thanks Very Much.. I think Your Right.. had i got down a little lower and even closer it tight have been better.. i wasn't willing to risk getting stuck in the mud trying to get any closer though lol it was Deep and Thick!
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Lufteluke Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2010  Student General Artist
Haha, I know what you mean.

This picture is good, but would definitely not be worth a watery grave:P
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RRocket-204 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2010  Professional Photographer
I don't believe this is fair for one reason, and one reason only. the comment that the shape of the image was incorrect. it would be fair to say that the image could have been better, but not wrong, or incorrect! Its an opinion, and in my opinion, i think the composition is interesting because of the crystal clear blue sky.
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RRocket-204 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2010  Professional Photographer
I don't believe this is fair for one reason, and one reason only. the comment that the shape of the image was incorrect. it would be fair to say that the image could have been better, but not wrong, or incorrect! Its an opinion, and in my opinion, i think the composition is interesting because of the crystal clear blue sky.
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o0oLUXo0o Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2010
Thanks alot Adam for the Support and the comment.. I took a look at your stuff and you have a Good eye keep up the good work and i will keep learning and see how things go.. lol

Oh and Get the 7D! :D its a Great Camera for the money!
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zootnik Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
very, very nice
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o0oLUXo0o Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2010
Thanks very Much Wendy! :)
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momto2 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
I love it
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o0oLUXo0o Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2010
Thanks Sam! :)
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Peug Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
A view that i wouldn't mind to have in my area:D Your capture is wonderful:clap:
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o0oLUXo0o Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2010
Thanks My Friend! Its a view that no picture I have EVER seen can truly reproduce! Yosemite is Truly Breathtaking in person!
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Peug Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2010
Yes it seems to be a great place;)
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edelweiss26 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
Imposing scenery!!! :hug: :wave:
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o0oLUXo0o Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
Thank you Very Much.. Yosemite is a beautiful place!
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edelweiss26 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2010
A pleasure!! :)
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Wingnut55 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010
good pic, spectacular cliffs.
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o0oLUXo0o Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010
Thank you.. I Love every View of Yosemite! its never ending! :)
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wiwatsawat Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010
beautiful!
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o0oLUXo0o Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010
Thanks! :)
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SkT0330 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
wow! Awesome reflection :D
I like on how the reflection shot it's really calmn and relaxing to watch...
Thanks for sharing this :heart:
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o0oLUXo0o Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010
Thank you So Much.. the water was very Calm that morning.. It was like glass.. wish the mud wasnt so bad so I could have got a bet place to shoot from..
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greglief Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Love those reflections!
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o0oLUXo0o Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010
I think i shot 20 or 30 refection shots that weekend.. there was so much rain if you didnt step in a puddle you shot pictures through them..
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JulianasGrandma Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010
Great shot, just perfect. Keep up the good work:)
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o0oLUXo0o Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010
Thank you Very very Much! :)
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JulianasGrandma Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010
You are very welcome:)
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GregoriusSuhartoyo Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Professional Photographer
Superb shot Brian.
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o0oLUXo0o Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010
Thakns My Friend...
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GeminiArtNStock Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010   Digital Artist
stunning work Brian
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o0oLUXo0o Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010
Thanks So Much Drew.. The Rain really has a way of washing the haze out and turning a blue sky bright and clear!
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GeminiArtNStock Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010   Digital Artist
you are doing really well there Brian
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MirMidPhotos Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow, amazing reflection. It looks really nice how the main rock isn't in the center.
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o0oLUXo0o Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010
Thanks So Much.. I decided this morning to change the Comp.. Im happy with how it came out..
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shortfingerzzz Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010
Can I give this a critique?
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o0oLUXo0o Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010
Yes Please Do.. Always good to hear Feedback... Thanks
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NIKON CORPORATION
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NIKON D90
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F/16.0
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400
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Oct 26, 2010, 9:08:08 AM
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